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KEY TO BE CONCISE: ELIMINATE UNNECESSARY WORDS
| Redundant |
Revised |
| true facts |
true |
| completely eliminate |
eliminate |
| refer back |
refer |
| repeat again |
repeat |
| combine together |
combine |
| close proximity |
close |
| few in number |
few |
| cheaper in cost |
cheaper, less costly |
| disappear from view |
disappear |
| past memories |
memories |
| important essentials |
essentials |
| personal beliefs |
beliefs |
| end result |
result |
| final outcome |
outcome |
| free of charge |
free |
| completely finish |
finish |
| Wordy/Outdated |
Revised |
| as per our discussion |
as (we) discussed |
| this day and age |
today |
| in reference to |
about |
| at the present time |
now, today |
| subsequent to |
after |
| first and foremost |
first |
| in the near future |
soon |
| attached please find |
attached |
| is
due to the fact that |
because |
| at the present time |
now |
| in the event that |
if |
| at all times |
always |
| in a situation in which |
when |
| is of the opinion that |
believes |
| at your earliest convenience |
soon |
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