Parallel Structure 1

Instructions: Edit the sentences below for parallel structure. For example:

Incorrect: The job duties include filing, to call back customers, and track deliveries.
Corrected: The job duties include filing, calling customers, and tracking deliveries.

1. Good writing results when writers focus on proofreading, to edit, and the revision of documents.

Your Answer:

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Good writing results when writers focus on proofreading, editing, and revising their documents.

2. At the company picnic, employees will play horseshoes, volleyball, and a soccer match will be held.

Your Answer:

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At the company picnic, employees will play horseshoes, volleyball, and soccer.

3. Your assigment was to increase your number of new clients, retaining your old clients, and get referrals.

Your Answer:

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Your assignment was to increase your number of new clients, retain your old clients and get referrals.

4. The job called for someone to freeze delinquent accounts, getting clients to bring their accounts up to date, and information provided about repayment options.

Your Answer:

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The job called for someone to freeze delinquent accounts, get clients to bring their accounts up to date, and provide information about repayment options.

5. More time needs to be spent calling clients and to inform them of the changes.

Your Answer:

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More time needs to be spent calling clients and informing them of the changes.

6. The message referred to selling the property and a profit could be made on it.

Your Answer:

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The message referred to selling the property and making a profit.

7. The sign said that the entrance was closed to deliveries and the arrival of guests.

Your Answer:

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The sign said that the entrance was closed to deliveries and guests.

8. To remain competitive in the job market, pay attention to staying abreast of new technology and your résumé should be kept updated.

Your Answer:

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To remain competitive in the job market, stay abreast of new technology and keep your résumé updated.

9. The new truck is used for delivering equipment and the transportation of supplies.

Your Answer:

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The new truck is used for delivering equipment and transporting supplies.

10. The new office provides applications to new clients and the current clients are given information.

Your Answer:

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The new office provides applications to new clients and gives information to current clients.